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导读Unit 4【写作任务】某杂志就“孩子该不该上课外班”对几位家长进行了采访,他们都同意孩子上,你对此持什么态度呢?假如你是Tom,请你向该杂志写一封信表达你的观点。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁应用文


Unit 4【写作任务】

某杂志就“孩子该不该上课外班”对几位家长进行了采访,他们都同意孩子上,你对此持什么态度呢?假如你是Tom,请你向该杂志写一封信表达你的观点。


【思路点拨】

1. 定基调

体裁:应用文(书信);信的主体部分为议论文

时态:一般现在时

人称:第一人称和第三人称


2. 谋布局、写句子


3. 巧衔接


本文表达自己的观点时,可以用同义表达in my opinion, I think和I believe,这样既避免重复又能使文笔生动。


4. 成篇章

Dear Sir or Madam,

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Tom


答案

2. 谋布局、写句子


(1) taking after-school classes

(2) children\'s health and happiness are more important

(3) I don\'t think parents should push their children so hard

(4) They should give their children enough time to relax

(5) how to learn


4. 成篇章

Dear Sir or Madam,

I don\'t think that children should take after-school classes.

Most parents hope that their children can improve their grades by taking after-school classes but they don\'t realize their children can get good grades by listening to the teacher carefully in class and finding a good way of learning.

Learning from a young age is important but in my opinion, children\'s health and happiness are more important. I don\'t think parents should push their children so hard. They should give them enough time to relax. Children need to be successful but they also need to be happy.

All in all, to be a successful person, I believe how to learn and how to be a happy learner are more important than taking after-school classes.

Yours truly,

Tom

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